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When the stupid Cupid came in my way
with bow and arrow, and began to say
"For the loneliness of yours, I have the cure:
a love for you, sweet and pure."
I said, "What kind of angel are you?
Why don't you look for something else to do?
You shoot people, play with their lives
to give them love, which is only strife;
I wonder how fun it must be
to play with other's feelings for pure vanity.
Then, next time you come in my way,
you mind your business, and go away!"
He stared perplexed. What to do, he didn't know.
Then I've stolen the bow and the arrows.
:iconc-allagash:
What can we learn with it?
You may be a mythological creature.
Still, interference is not welcome, especially when it comes to my sentimental life.

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~Hawkheart29 Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Cupid, he's just doing his job.
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~thymetoparty Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
Nice, VERY nice.
Controlling the emotions when it comes to crushes is the best way to go.
:D Keep up the good work!
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~Simili84 Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Yep....yes indeed!

couldn't have said it better :P
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=christianross75 Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This poem truly show that we have absolute no control over our emotion.
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:iconc-allagash:
Ok, ok.... next time I meet Cupid, I'll try to control myself and be more polite.
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:iconhaakon95:
i think its true that we cant control emotions, no one can forse u to love someon and false love is what hurt the most in this hell to life, so dont make it worse then it already is
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Mood: Love *666Bruno Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D :clap:
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:iconeclecticquill:
=EclecticQuill Jul 24, 2012  Professional Writer
I always preferred his earlier incarnation as Eros...
The Greeks had it spot on!

Great poem babe :)
I love it :hug:
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