Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconc-allagash: More from C-Allagash


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
December 30, 2012
File Size
541 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
801
Favourites
49 (who?)
Comments
19
Downloads
17

License

Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
×
When you are feeling sad
what's the sense in romantic songs?
Love is good, they say...
Did I learn it all wrong?

Heart is an attention whore,
love is a vanity game,
romantic stories are just lies -
Now cover your face, and hide the shame.

Forget the trifles and common sense,
remember this one thing:
No one cares about your feelings,
love is rotten and it stinks.
:police: © All rights reserved.

I didn't want it to be the last poem of the year... but better than make it be the first.

I actually like it
Add a Comment:
 
:iconkilluaxme:
this poem is well written and i must say i do like it,
Reply
:iconwritingbubble:
I don'T know why, because the poem sounds rather negative, but somehow I think the poem is quite funny :D
Reply
Flagged as Spam
:iconadorkablepeanut314:
AdorkablePeanut314 Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love is unfair too, like if the person your heart desires doesn't exist.... :cry:
Reply
:iconsparkknight2:
SparkKnight2 Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i agree :D
Reply
:iconsummerday27:
summerday27 Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can relate. This is simple yet speaks so much. It conveys such a sad, yet realistic sense of broken hearted-ness
Reply
:icon666bruno:
666Bruno Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
pas très optimiste mais joliment écrit (:
Reply
:iconc-allagash:
Merci!

Bruno, je suis fâchée!
Il y a un de tes textes que je voudrais bien "feature" dans mon journal.
Mais je me perds dans ta galerie!
Reply
:icon666bruno:
666Bruno Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
vaut pas être fâchée (:
Quelle texte ?
Reply
:iconc-allagash:
Je pense que c'est un peu "vieux", de quand je t'ai connu.
Mais ta gallerie a BEAUCOUP des choses et c'est difficile trouver des choses.

Je cherche encore
Reply
Add a Comment: