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When you are feeling sad
what's the sense in romantic songs?
Love is good, they say...
Did I learn it all wrong?

Heart is an attention whore,
love is a vanity game,
romantic stories are just lies -
Now cover your face, and hide the shame.

Forget the trifles and common sense,
remember this one thing:
No one cares about your feelings,
love is rotten and it stinks.
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I didn't want it to be the last poem of the year... but better than make it be the first.

I actually like it
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
this poem is well written and i must say i do like it,
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writingbubble Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
I don'T know why, because the poem sounds rather negative, but somehow I think the poem is quite funny :D
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AdorkablePeanut314 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love is unfair too, like if the person your heart desires doesn't exist.... :cry:
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Overrated-Relish Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i agree :D
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can relate. This is simple yet speaks so much. It conveys such a sad, yet realistic sense of broken hearted-ness
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666Bruno Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
pas très optimiste mais joliment écrit (:
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Merci!

Bruno, je suis fâchée!
Il y a un de tes textes que je voudrais bien "feature" dans mon journal.
Mais je me perds dans ta galerie!
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666Bruno Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
vaut pas être fâchée (:
Quelle texte ?
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Je pense que c'est un peu "vieux", de quand je t'ai connu.
Mais ta gallerie a BEAUCOUP des choses et c'est difficile trouver des choses.

Je cherche encore
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666Bruno Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
dis moi de quoi cela parlais (:
il n'y a que 21 pages dans ma galerie :D
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:iconc-allagash:
C-Allagash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Hahaha, pas de problème.
Je viens de le trouver, mais dans ma propre galerie des favoris, c'est plus facile!
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666Bruno Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D je vais avoir l'honneur de paraître dans ton journal, waou.
je crois que je vais pleurer...
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Lol, pas de drame!
J'avais envie de mettre ta deviation làb-bas avant, mais c'était vraiment difficile de la trouver!
Et j'avais perdu le texte dans mon propre ordinateur! LOL
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Claudia-R Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good poem
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FeyPandora Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Somehow I like this... Maybe because if you are lovesick you feel exact like that.
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