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La semaine dernière le monde a arrêté devant la tragédie passée en Paris et, d'un trait, tous nous sommes assemblés en douleur.
Je sais bien que je devrais avoir écrit quelque chose avant, mais comme j'ai dit dans mon poème, j'étais exaspérée et je n'avais pas envie de penser à ce sujet.
J'ai mes amis en France moi et j'avais peur de demander comment allaient les choses et savoir quelque chose de mauvaise.
Alors, je parlais avec :iconthe-sprite-lady: et ce que je déteste sur des gens drôles c'est que quand elles parlent sérieusement, c'est vraiment important. Et, elle m'a dit qu'il y avait beaucoup de bonnes oeuvres ici sur ce thème.
Maintenant, que je peux penser un peu mieux (mais pas comprendre, car je peux pas!), je voudrais partager ces deviations avec vous. Bien sûr, nous ne pouvons pas faire rien pour changer cette nuit horrible là, mais nous sommes tous avec Paris et c'est notre pauvre façon de démontrer notre soutien et douleur.

(Je m'excuse en raison mon français, il y a beaucoup de temps que je n'écris pas, mais je ne crois pas que ce message doit être écrit en quelque autre langue)

Mon poème
Prions pour ParisNotre souffrance devient une seule
Car dans la douleur nous sommes frères
Le chaos est la nouvelle routine
La vie, pas qu'un état éphémère
L'existence perdue des innocents
Le sang des hommes et des femmes
Les questions restent sans réponse
Lorsque le torment assume nos âmes
Comment expliquer, comment supporter
cette monstrueuse barbarie?
Mes frères en douleur, donnons les mains
et, avec tout le coeur, prions pour Paris


Mature Content

   City of LightSitting along the banks of the Seine,
Lies the beautiful city of Paris.
Elegantly magical in sun or rain,
Tonight betrayed by evil's malice.
The City of Light, the name you are called,
Many out enjoying your wine and bread.
But now the world looks on appalled,
When acts quite usual left so many dead.
So many innocents lost in the theater,
A high price to pay for any song.
The devil lying in wait like a predator,
But they can't stop the music for long.
Out for a night, a friendly game of sport,
No one expecting the violence which came.
Our way of life these terrorists would thwart,
But our love of life, they will never claim!
For we are Paris, the City of Light,
We sing our anthem and band together.
Our hearts love strong and we stand tonight,
To fight for our freedom you cannot tether.
The Eiffel Tower standing tall in its beauty,
A graceful presence to light the way.
Reminding us of our strength and duty,
Stand unafraid, honoring those who died today.
©2015 Carol Gregoire
  :: by Rayon2lune Tears of Paris by Momotte2  Nous Sommes Unis by AshEntropy  Mes Condoleances  - #PrayForParis by SolcaNubiprayforparis by berkozturk


Il y a plus dans le groupe 

Pray-For-Paris






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It's another subject, but I'd also to thank :iconliveartbreatheart: (again) for featuring my silly Take All This LoveTake all this love you say you feel
Take all this love you say is real
Take all this love you keep in you
Take all this love that is so true
Take all this love for that special one
Take all this love for anyone
Take all this love expressed in caress
Take all this love you can't even express...
AND TRADE IT FOR COFFEE!    
 in her amazing  Poetry Feature Part III
Welcome to my Poetry Feature Part III

Thank you all for viewing, hope you enjoy, find some to favorite, comment on and maybe even a few new fellow deviants to watch!
Enjoy
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Almost-contrived by wordofthewillow
Beyond Brambles by wordofthewillow
Time and Politics by ShihSnTz
November 16th 2015 (Winter Rain) by ShihSnTz
November 15th 2015 (Birthday) by ShihSnTz
Take All This Love by C-Allagash
Frozen by C-Allagash
Infidelity by C-Allagash

I know she is an angel in my life


  • Mood: Anguish
  • Reading: War and Piece
  • Watching: Amadeus
  • Drinking: Coffee
Rest, D, D sharp
Then another compass
Requiem aeternam
A requiem for the mass

Firstly Introitus,
Kyrie, Dies Irae
Tuba mirum,
Rex tremendae

Reccordare, confurtatis,
Lacrimosa... next part
Domine and hostias
Death can also be art

Sanctus, Benedictus
How can it be?
Agnus Dei, Communio
This requiem is killing me

Notes for soprano, alto,
tenor and bass to sing
Breath leaves me
among bassoons and strings

I fear I am writing
my own requiem
Kyrie eleison
Salva me, fons pietatis. Amen
Requiem
I don't like to write descriptions, but I think it may be necessary this time. So...

Yes, it is about Mozart's Requiem (if you don't know the story, the poem is a kind of abstract. If you know it though, it certainly makes more sense).
The first line contais the very first compass of the score.
As for the expressions in Latin, they are the parts that integrate the requiem (Introitus, KYrie, Dies Irae, etc) and some of the lyrics, taken from Mozart's oeuvre (which can be seen here pt.slideshare.net/ursulaluna/m…).
Regarding the meaning, I think you don't need to understand much of Latin to have an idea of what it is about, but here a translation in English in case it's necessary www.stmatthews.com/choir/mozar…

Another work about this theme is the film "Amadeus", considered the best film about a musician, and one of the greatest films of all time.
IMDB link here www.imdb.com/title/tt0086879/
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Notre souffrance devient une seule
Car dans la douleur nous sommes frères
Le chaos est la nouvelle routine
La vie, pas qu'un état éphémère

L'existence perdue des innocents
Le sang des hommes et des femmes
Les questions restent sans réponse
Lorsque le torment assume nos âmes

Comment expliquer, comment supporter
cette monstrueuse barbarie?
Mes frères en douleur, donnons les mains
et, avec tout le coeur, prions pour Paris
Take all this love you say you feel
Take all this love you say is real
Take all this love you keep in you
Take all this love that is so true
Take all this love for that special one
Take all this love for anyone
Take all this love expressed in caress
Take all this love you can't even express...

AND TRADE IT FOR COFFEE!    
La semaine dernière le monde a arrêté devant la tragédie passée en Paris et, d'un trait, tous nous sommes assemblés en douleur.
Je sais bien que je devrais avoir écrit quelque chose avant, mais comme j'ai dit dans mon poème, j'étais exaspérée et je n'avais pas envie de penser à ce sujet.
J'ai mes amis en France moi et j'avais peur de demander comment allaient les choses et savoir quelque chose de mauvaise.
Alors, je parlais avec :iconthe-sprite-lady: et ce que je déteste sur des gens drôles c'est que quand elles parlent sérieusement, c'est vraiment important. Et, elle m'a dit qu'il y avait beaucoup de bonnes oeuvres ici sur ce thème.
Maintenant, que je peux penser un peu mieux (mais pas comprendre, car je peux pas!), je voudrais partager ces deviations avec vous. Bien sûr, nous ne pouvons pas faire rien pour changer cette nuit horrible là, mais nous sommes tous avec Paris et c'est notre pauvre façon de démontrer notre soutien et douleur.

(Je m'excuse en raison mon français, il y a beaucoup de temps que je n'écris pas, mais je ne crois pas que ce message doit être écrit en quelque autre langue)

Mon poème
Prions pour ParisNotre souffrance devient une seule
Car dans la douleur nous sommes frères
Le chaos est la nouvelle routine
La vie, pas qu'un état éphémère
L'existence perdue des innocents
Le sang des hommes et des femmes
Les questions restent sans réponse
Lorsque le torment assume nos âmes
Comment expliquer, comment supporter
cette monstrueuse barbarie?
Mes frères en douleur, donnons les mains
et, avec tout le coeur, prions pour Paris


Mature Content

   City of LightSitting along the banks of the Seine,
Lies the beautiful city of Paris.
Elegantly magical in sun or rain,
Tonight betrayed by evil's malice.
The City of Light, the name you are called,
Many out enjoying your wine and bread.
But now the world looks on appalled,
When acts quite usual left so many dead.
So many innocents lost in the theater,
A high price to pay for any song.
The devil lying in wait like a predator,
But they can't stop the music for long.
Out for a night, a friendly game of sport,
No one expecting the violence which came.
Our way of life these terrorists would thwart,
But our love of life, they will never claim!
For we are Paris, the City of Light,
We sing our anthem and band together.
Our hearts love strong and we stand tonight,
To fight for our freedom you cannot tether.
The Eiffel Tower standing tall in its beauty,
A graceful presence to light the way.
Reminding us of our strength and duty,
Stand unafraid, honoring those who died today.
©2015 Carol Gregoire
  :: by Rayon2lune Tears of Paris by Momotte2  Nous Sommes Unis by AshEntropy  Mes Condoleances  - #PrayForParis by SolcaNubiprayforparis by berkozturk


Il y a plus dans le groupe 

Pray-For-Paris






-----

It's another subject, but I'd also to thank :iconliveartbreatheart: (again) for featuring my silly Take All This LoveTake all this love you say you feel
Take all this love you say is real
Take all this love you keep in you
Take all this love that is so true
Take all this love for that special one
Take all this love for anyone
Take all this love expressed in caress
Take all this love you can't even express...
AND TRADE IT FOR COFFEE!    
 in her amazing  Poetry Feature Part III
Welcome to my Poetry Feature Part III

Thank you all for viewing, hope you enjoy, find some to favorite, comment on and maybe even a few new fellow deviants to watch!
Enjoy
------









Almost-contrived by wordofthewillow
Beyond Brambles by wordofthewillow
Time and Politics by ShihSnTz
November 16th 2015 (Winter Rain) by ShihSnTz
November 15th 2015 (Birthday) by ShihSnTz
Take All This Love by C-Allagash
Frozen by C-Allagash
Infidelity by C-Allagash

I know she is an angel in my life


  • Mood: Anguish
  • Reading: War and Piece
  • Watching: Amadeus
  • Drinking: Coffee

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MaiveCL Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016
Si tu aimes les écrivains, tu aimeras mon Projet :
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FloatingTree Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2015  Professional General Artist
Merci pour le fave, c'etait une mois passe maintenant mais merci! 
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LiveArtBreatheArt Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much for the favorites and watch, greatly appreciated! :heart:
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Kaviam Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015
I like what you have done so far, it seems that you have put a lot of work on it, your poems are so amazing! can't wait to read more, good job!
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AdamGonth Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the fave : D
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